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Up to the Stars Sending,
An Oblivion Never Ending.
To Feel that Silken Embrace,
To Find Life as but a Race.

Drifting Amoungst the Stars,
These, they Stand to the Dark as Scars.
Celestial Beauty Coursing through my Veins,
One cannot find the Words to describe Life Among these Lanes.

Soaring on Raven-Black Wings,
The World Beneath me Sways and Sings.
Floating in Serenity
Escaping Eternity
Smiling at Mortality.
©2008-2009 ~xXDeathofRomanceXx
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Death, oh how I crave thee! Just joking, you know I love you life, death was just a mistake!

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:iconvalentine-shade:
matt, once again i heartly endorce this event or product....*cough* i mean this is freakin awsome.
sometimes i dream about killing you and eating your brain, so that i can steal just some of the tallent youve got.

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Valentine Shade
:iconxxdeathofromancexx:
Um, yeah, thanks ha ha ha. I always loved the brain eating, wakes me up in the morn. Yours is rather a tad better then mine i would say tho

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But the Beauty of that Rose has been Known to Wither through the Gaze of these Timeless Eyes
:iconxxdeathofromancexx:
Talent that is, your talent is rather a tad better

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But the Beauty of that Rose has been Known to Wither through the Gaze of these Timeless Eyes
:iconvalentine-shade:
mattt matttt little mattt YOUR F*****G BRILLIANT and your stuff at lest has freakin meaning it makes people actually feel something. god your so self loathing

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Valentine Shade
:iconxxdeathofromancexx:
*laughs!* Have you READ it? Pretty words, but they mean nothing. Yours has body and EMOTION behind it, mine has a confusion of concepts that make baby jesus cry!

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But the Beauty of that Rose has been Known to Wither through the Gaze of these Timeless Eyes
:iconvalentine-shade:
wrong i sacrifice meaning and emotion for rhyming i hatemy self for that.
you dont you can convey meaning and emotion while making it rhym (weell at lest this one) but thats the point you can do anything while keeping the meaning and feeling of it and your words used are far more potent then mine. you have a talent. jesus man. *slaps* get your self together*slaps again*

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Valentine Shade
:iconanamelechrayne:
love the rhyhm *sways with it*

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RaYnE wAs HeRe!!!!!
:iconxxdeathofromancexx:
Ha ha ha, thanks. Write that the other day, I told a friend of mine I was in a good mood and he was like WRITE A POEM, gave me very little choice *whimper*

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But the Beauty of that Rose has been Known to Wither through the Gaze of these Timeless Eyes
:iconanamelechrayne:
well you did a good job.

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RaYnE wAs HeRe!!!!!

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